Based on the interview that we did on Tuesday (10/12) I think that our focus should be on her story with a focus on her children and what family means to her. We could open up with the beginning questions that we asked, about her family and then get into her story that she shared and then close with the last two questions about what she wanted to get out of the interview process.
We can add pictures of her family if she has them and is willing to share to make it more interesting for the viewer. I think it will be easy to edit because the questions flowed pretty easily. We should also try to figure out how to make a background that is more interesting rather than just the wall. We might also consider asking her more questions if we discover that what we have is not enough, or doesn't really have a conclusive message about her or her story.
11/3/16- revision plan
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Add in subtitles to make it more understandable for the audience.
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Shorten/ cut out points of the story that are not as important to shorten and include more of a conclusion.
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Pace questions so viewers are able to read.
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Add conclusion to sum up her main point about family being so important to her getting through the challenges that she faced.
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Revise pictures that are in the beginning of the video.
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Find music effective for pieces of story